Tuesday, June 13, 2006

Rewrite

After contemplating the lessons contained in Skeeter's review of 'Julia', on Mikesgroup
I rewrote my first 2/3 chapters.
I created a strong Hook.
I feel happier with the narrative tone of this rewrite.
It reads like what I wanted all along.


Tonight I have read about the need for Pen Names in today's unsafe world. Something to think about.

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